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Dear Santa

December 18, 2009 by

Hey Santa, you already know that I’ve been nice this year. I’ve done allot of nice thing this year and been doing the things I’ve been told to. I helped my Grandmother cook and clean. I helped my cousin out by babysitting her daughter while she works. Most of the time i did what i was told to do like clean my room or walk the dog. I’ve been a good friend and listener this year to most of the people i know and meet. so I’ve been a good girl so far this year.

what i want this year for Christmas is:

  • A new cell phone
  • A ipod touch
  • Books
  • Hatchet man necklace
  • Hatchet man hat/hoodie

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Why Cell Phones Should Be Alowed In Schools

November 9, 2009 by

There is a fire in your school and you could be trapped inside and there is no way to tell anyone where u is. But if you had a cell phone you could call a friend or someone outside the fire and tell there where u are in the school and help to get you out. Or have you ever had a change of plans and get in trouble for not letting your parents what was going on? If you had a cell phone you could call and tell them what’s going on. Having a cell phone in school could save a life or keep u out of trouble and let your parents know your ok. So why can’t we have them in school?

The number 1 reason they should be allowed in schools is there could be an emergency.  Like I said in the previous paragraph there could be a fire in the school and u can’t get out. If u had a call phone you could call a friend for help to get you out. You could be left at school and not have a ride home you could call your house and tell them that you need a ride home. There are a lot of emergency’s that could happen at school that you would need to call for help but I can’t call unless we are allowed to have cell phones.

Cell phones are easy to take places. They are small and easy to put in your pocket or purse. Unlike normal phones that are bigger heavier and harder to take around with you. Cell phones can stay in your pocket or purse and not be a distraction you could keep it off or on silent so it won’t distract anyone if someone calls you. Not only are they easy to carry around but they can get good reception almost anywhere.

Cell phones are easy and fun to use for everyone. They are easy to send calls and you can save peoples numbers in your cell so you don’t got to remember all the numbers you know. You can have numbers on speeds dial so you any got to press one button to call someone. That great if there is an emergency and need help fast.  Ya there are games and things to distract some people but there are more good things like the safety of students then the things that could distract them.

There are a lot of good reasons to allow students to have cell phones in school. There are some things that could distract them but the good things out weight the bad. So why shouldn’t students have cell phones? It would help assure that there will be more safety for the students is real trouble happened.huh

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